rain on plum blossom
without a sound from falling
a new drop's embrace
Author notes
I was going to try to do this first in japanese to have the proper おん(on) reading, but I then realized I'm way too tired and lazy to do that. 
Maybe later.
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A contest entry
- Haiku Appreciation by Joseph Hollis.
2000 points, ended December 17, 2008, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Totally beautiful! This is better than the gold. At least you did not misspell anything. You'd think they'd consider spelling in such a contest. I think yours is super!
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Beautiful and serene. The title of this piece is just perfect. I enjoyed the image of raindrops gathering on plum blossoms. Thank you for your entry.
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goodluck
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I love this so much, not entirely sure why but I think it's because of the whole picture it makes with each individual word and letter.
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again. beautiful
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Thanks.
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