Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Sweet Dreamer

Missing image
Come little Angel
Come ride with me
The land is taken
But the skies are free

The wind is blowing
The clouds ride by
Let’s hitch a ride
And explore the sky

Why look over there
A balloon I see
Ridden by elephants
Just for you and me

Giraffes fly kites
While Storks carry babes
As Angels strum lyres
And monkeys play charades

And high in the Heavens
God signals us five
So we dance a dance
Keeping our God alive

Don’t awaken yet
For we’re not through
Bet you a hole in a hoop
I can out dream you!

Author notes

Ah, to sleep, perchance to dream...every child can do it, and so can we a-DOLTS, we just have to remember how. The drawing is by me, it should make a good dartboard or fish-wrap; whatever household use you have for it. Please feel free to use it, if you're really that desperate, just give me the credit, or the blame!

Have you lost your ability to dream like a child?

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • carole21
    December 23, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    nicely done . . liked "But the skies are free" and "explore the sky" . . good ending as well !!


  • onesugar gold member
    December 18, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Amazing...just so so beautiful..to be able to dream like that again..I never seem to remember mine...well some, how could I forget dreaming about you??

    This was a pleasure B

    Love ~sugar~ x


  • ennovy silver member
    December 16, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Wow I like it too...the pic is an excellent drawing and the expression on the face of the little girl is just beautiful so peaceful she looks....The words mean even more....for I dream often and i could relate to this poem....my darling Brazos....an wonderful job an showing your talent & skills....novy

    I love you


  • Rheea gold member
    December 16, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Ah my darling man this I love about you. I shall put it on the frig with you name on it.. I want to sleep and dream with the animals.. short on both lately why am I up with you tonight? Taking my coco and going back to bed..love you my Brazos oh the moon's not doing nothing to night .