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Eavesdropper

(He: Ding dong, ding dong! Las Cosas del amor ... Shall I play the guitar? tremelo? piano?

She: What about the heart? What about the harp? How do you remember our love?

He: No, no, nó: not the harp ... it is too sad. Shall we dance the rumba; the twist; to the beat of the Rolling Stones? Carole?

She: Hmmmmmmm?

He: Please dance for me! Please dance to the beat of my heart!

She: NO! NO! I want to make my own music ... I want to drift like a rose ... But please, how can I tell you about our night in Rio?

He: La Music?

She: Si ... Vivaldi? Bach?

He: ... or do you choose Leonardo?

She: Leonardo? Favio? Si ... Favio! My Love!

He: Oh, my Love! Let's dance to our own music! The Music of our Love ...

Together: Ding dong, ding dong ..)

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Written March 8th, 2002

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  • myrataal silver member
    March 9, 2002
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    Thank you, gecko, Mike & Empress: I am learning slooooooowly!

  • Empress
    March 8, 2002
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    *cackles* Sweet.

  • Michael Dennis Rivers
    March 8, 2002
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    I laughed and loved the last line... women!
    Thank you,
    Mike


  • gecko
    March 8, 2002
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    oh Myra lady
    that was so very cute and and and and
    yeah
    I liked
    grin


  • myrataal silver member
    March 8, 2002
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    OOOOOOOOOH I am dancing too! Thanks!

  • Citrus
    March 8, 2002
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    *runs to put cd on immediately* Cant find anyone to 'dance' with.
    What a refreshing change!
    Lovely.

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