sweat coated my body like drops of morning dew,
my arms were tangled in metal bars
and my legs were tangled
around you.
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idk...
i keep trying to add but
its difficult.
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- Hues of Red in 12 Lines or Less (there's a catch) by The Fun House.
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WEE!
Splendid! I love this, and I'm not entirely sure why! It just sort of...grabs you.
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Whoa, what images this conjures in the mind. I think in my youth, yes…in my youth this would be something I would have wound myself into quite easily and most often LOL Quite the vixen I was. This is great.
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this is cute. I dont know if its supposed to be bad like i read another persons comment & they were like oooh lifes a bitch. I read it like, going to the playground in the morning and having a monkey fight? Haha.
I liked it. -
morning dew
to metal bars..
harsh..
and hard.
life's a bitch
i hope
you fee the freedom;
guys are assholes
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I like, it's a great start!!
Keep working on it!!
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