from drizzle to downpour
light cascade to cloudburst
soul communicates crescendo
along with gentle melody
i can't confer with definition
because it can't be defined
i simply know it's divine
In a list
A contest entry
- Shh - Don't tell anyone by Suzanne Dia.
3500 points, ended January 5, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I think this write should have just won your own contest!! Beautiful! I'm loving this list of yours!
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this is very beautiful, Mark -- congrats, and i want to know your secret crush too.
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I will give you six cans of Pringles, four noogies, a bottle of rum, and um.....a half pound of fudge
if you tell me who you have a crush on
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How do you make me love a love poem?
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gosh, i shivered as i read this. this is sheer beauty and i loved it
~Luce
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"i can't confer with definition
because it can't be defined"
I think you defined
what you were trying to;
felt like it to me.
-Jessica
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Wonderful work here as always bro!
it's great to read you again.
Great job putting this one together
here and good luck to you in the contest!
Jeremy0826
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The alliteration in this poem is lovely I like the vague thoughts that this write woke in my mind - and the way the last line made me feel was electric this is beautiful.
♦ M
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