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Smile for Me

I will take away your pain if you’d let me in.
Every breathe you would breathe,
I’d let right on in,
Come beauty, come kindness,
Listen to her please!
She longs to be beautiful can you not hear her pleas?
I’ll smile for you, if you’d smile for me,
But it’s so hard to not be sad,
Your beauty is perfect already,
Why doesn’t this make you glad?
But here comes a storm,
To take you deeper through,
I long to grab your eyes,
And tell you I love you.
The night it fast approaches,
Bringing danger with every glance, it doesn’t take much
To make me smile,
But you gotta promise you’ll smile back.
We can brighten this day together,
Just find the joy in your heart,
You’ll feel a little more gorgeous,
With everytime you feel your heart,
So smile for me, smile for me,
I long to see your joy,
Who knew one movement,
Could forever change a life..

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  • The Poetic Prince
    December 16, 2008
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    How can you keep doing this??

    Another master piece man who are you? You just pop in from time to time to lay a poetry bomb on us? My favourite lines were "I long to grab your eyes/And tell you I love you." To me that says so much, and it just sticks in my mind. As I read your poem over and over again I keep coming back to
    those lines. Keep iut up man, and don't wait so long for the next one.

    -Eric