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christmas dude



you better not shout, you
better not cry, you better not
pout i'm tellin you why.
christmas dude is comin to town.

he's bigger than a whale, he likes
to wear some red, christmas dude is
comin to town. if you happen to  catch
him you will have no luck. you better not lie.

cause i'm tellin you why, christmas dude is
leavin the town. he like to take your
cookies and milk but say no!

if you ask him for a present then
guess what he will say " no no no"
cause christmas dude is leavin
the town. and still don't give him any cookies!

wait has anybody seen my gingerbread
cookies!

Author notes

don't leave any cookies lying around!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Low Low
    December 19, 2008

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    That was so clever.

    I cant wait to see you in action when i come down there and you are writing this.
    That was really good Gabe!


  • darlintlc silver member
    December 19, 2008

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    Christmas dude is leavin town
    he won't get far we'll hunt him down!

    NO ONE...takes my cookies!!

    very funny

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    December 16, 2008

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    Yes Gabe, you are quite silly!!!
    Have a Merry Christmas.
    Brian


  • Number 13
    December 16, 2008
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    you're so silly!