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living heroes (issue #2: the deathskin demon)



from your fingertips flow
all of creation’s music

(and we, the jealous mortals,
weep
at your caress.)                                        [play us a melody, thou piper!]

how many,
i wonder,
have fallen before your touch,
only to fall to the wayside?                      [you know, as i know,
                                                                        that it is a delicious great many]
and oh yes,
        the blood of the innocents
will drip from your shaking hands
until they shine like alabaster

                                                                    [be the god that we cannot
                                                                          and allow us to live
                                                                      in your glorious shadow]


for we are not

as proud
as you can be                                                so deserve it.


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  • Asabouros.
    December 16, 2008

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    *blinks a few times*...damn. I'm really likin' this Wurthy, *does a little happy dance, loves when you do your series poems*

    *looks at the last line, eye twitches slightly*

    if someguy was holding a gun to my head and told me to pick a favorite part or die....(well, I'd get my fucking mecha and pwn the bitch....but...) I'd pick....


    " [be the god that we cannot
    and allow us to live
    in your glorious shadow] "

    this is fantastic, but then i like everything you write...*sends out a massive world-wide bulletin saying to praise wurthy or be destroyed*