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Goodbye, Goodbye

In the world before us
Lays the dark and foggy road
Induces fear and worry
As it leers, it does goad

A shroud that makes us foolish,
Worried, frightened and upset
But in this land of trepidation,
Is a sensei we may get.

She'll take her torch away
To new people she may enlist
So take your wisdom onwards
Miss Briggs you will missed

Author notes

Written on request to say goodbye to a teacher from Debby.

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  • Reanna Eryn
    March 15
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    Beautiful mid-lenght write. I looove it!


    • Naznomarn
      March 15
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      Hehe! Thank you!
      I wrote this one on request when someone's teacher was leaving school