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Haha.

It's really funny
how you can get excited to talk to someone
and they just rip you up.

Ha. Ha.

Right?

I lick these wounds in solitude
and pray for sweeter words tomorrow.


Haha.

Right?

Tis Late. Comments, as always, appreciated

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  • StarIlluminated
    December 18, 2008
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    cool poem meredith. I can kind of relate....it's good tho.

    One thing, when you did the two haha's, one was Ha.Ha. and the other was haha. I think it would be better if your ha's were kept consistent, but just a suggestion.

    Wow, that was the strangest comment I've ever left. Keep your ha's consistent? Who says that?

    <3 KT


  • liduen silver member
    December 16, 2008
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    He he (not ha ha) nice sarcasim

    Great write!