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The S + m Tango in Free Verse

Demolished walls of pride,
lie discarded like rumbled sheets,
daring words of resistence,
silenced by sighs.

Coiled, leather cobra
burning with your desire
on snaking limbs
secrete obedient kisses from starved lips.

Helixed imprints,
devotional lines,
resonate gasps of platitudes,
as searing flesh brings
lust to life.

Masochistic senses, soliciting forceful touches,
inviting crimson silk rises,
savouring tenderness,
as love demands compliance.

Caress, my impudence.
with sweet tasting dampness,
bring me inside,
embraced in softly whispering thighs.

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  • The D O M
    December 22, 2008
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    You know this is for the final


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    December 22, 2008
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    "Caress, my impudence". Oh superb. I must remember to call My girl by that name!


    • Glirastes II
      December 22, 2008
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      LMAO take the comma out and it becomes an instruction - one of my many ways of saying KMA.