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woven like shells

    Keeping track of the bubbles in my brain,
digging a hole for syryp on vinyl discs.
    I can bite my air back in seance school,
but the little dog has a butter-coated bong.
    Hat tricks, on the left silk screen pairs,
kneeling, wading pool sent US mail.
    For just one second, Lenny Bruce
debunks atari, costing the race.
   

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  • GreensBabe
    December 30, 2008
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    Strange but thats how you are!!!!!!!


  • chills gold member
    December 16, 2008
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    Weird and abstract indeed! Like the first line - I'm doing that a lot lately..... x deb

  • BadBovine
    December 15, 2008
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    This poem is amazing, with its quick pace and strange imagery... very fun to read. Great job.


  • mad hattie
    December 15, 2008
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    this is too special for me to comment on.