chipped away porcelain
falling apart like wet cotton fibers
in tiny flakes smaller than snow.
sprinkle the toffee
with broken glass shards
and hope you won’t choke;
everything’s broken,
but even ripped up
colored paper can still
be made beautiful.
Author notes
prompt: confetti;
picture:
http://lsgirldn.deviantart.com/art/Confetti-101177516
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I wasn't sure where you were taking this at first but I like where you went with it. The closing lines summed it up well. Very nicely done
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A great image altogether! I enjoyed this very much.
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"sprinkle the toffee
with broken glass shards
and hope you won’t choke"
^ DEADLY!
"everything’s broken,
but even ripped up
colored paper can still
be made beautiful."
^ so true.
As usual, your talent leaves me speechless.
Your poetry brings tears to my eyes, but good tears, tears of wonderment
Shelly
x
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oh woah.. i didnt realize this was in your list as well haha.
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very well presented...a lot of great imagery
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lol
small asian dude!!
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eheee
when i first read that comment i had no idea what you were talking about.. but when i went to the poem i realized i had a picture up.
lol it was the only picture i was able to find at my 2am searchings that seemed to kind of fit lol.
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