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I Saw Daddy....

I saw daddy kissing Mrs.Claus
underneath the stoop of our old porch
he couldn't see the smirk I smiled
while I hid in the bushes underneath
I was supposed to went upstairs to take a shower.
Then I saw daddy kissing Mrs. Claus
into her neck his head did fit so right
Oh what a disaster it would of been
Had mommy got to peep
As daddy kissed Mrs Claus's neck again!

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I saw mommy kissing santa claus

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  • Beauty Of Silence
    December 22, 2008
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    aww. this is such an innocent and cute write. keep penning


  • wohadreambig
    December 16, 2008
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    Very cute and lively. Nicely done thanks for the entry