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Louisianne

it's a dance of madness and rapture
inescapable as-i cry with laughing gasps
of pure chocolate melted in a bowl
toward this falling tree divine like red wine
to these lips so close to my touch of sexual gesture
should i die this very moment -in Ecstasy! (?)
then i would kiss the air you breathe
and i breath the air you exhale
the mo-ment slow-ly fades
to-pure nothingness and everything (like)
many beautiful memories
we shall share to-gether (one) day-I-pray
you 're single touch tingles my love for you
soft-ly unstable titanium
slow-ly one(more)time and now begins
I'll love you if you let me prove this to your heart
my single most devotion to only you
(my love)

my morning beginning day -everlast and

"celestial"
my everlasting agony because i Want
to sing in your silence so that you might hear
what I have to say
if we should hold each other secondly
hands and sighs, to kiss your breast and sweet your lullabies
will sing to us in dear (pure) nothingness -forever!
because I am nothing without you

Louisianne

 

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my soul-mate

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    December 19, 2008

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    Thank you for entering my contest with this poem did you mean "breathe" instead of "breath" - it seems it would make more sense that way is all anyway, I like the clear devotion in this piece - very lovely.

    Keep writing

    Polly


  • Dalaney gold member
    December 15, 2008

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    Everything and anything is possible with you, Sean.
    This poem is a testament to the man you are and
    the man I have always known you to be. Love, Lane