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No End to Time

So I was happy for a time,
Before the pain and warning signs.
Every day trying to find,
a way to travel back in time.

I need a way to stop the clock,
Reverse a tick, take back a tock.
I need some way to pick the lock,
Open the past so we can talk.

And all the times I keep trying,
To go back and stop your crying,
I keep losing, I keep sighing,
Every time I keep on dying.

I lost myself so long ago,
So long ago I just don’t know,
If I can stop the raging flow,
Stop the river before you go.

Mend this bleeding heart that’s soaked and,
Please take my thanks as your token,
Don’t forget the words we’ve spoken.
Either way, I’m left heartbroken.

I can’t go back and make it fit.
Stuck behind these walls, I sit,
Now I finally realize it,
There’s no end to this dark pit.

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Option #2

A bit depressing...like the last poem I wrote. Yet fulfilling to me, in its own unique way.

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  • drumbum7856
    December 21, 2008
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    sad.


  • Shannon62875
    December 15, 2008

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    awww

    This is a very good write and i can feel your heartache.. im really sorry for what you are going through and i hope you make it through this... Keep up the great work and good luck in my contest!

    Shannon*Leah