You think I have some problems,
You might be right, I know.
But since your doing this to me,
This is the way to go.
You always crush my high spirit,
Even if we're apart.
You are the reason why,
I need to fix my broken heart.
You're stepping on my feelings,
It causes me much pain.
I always try to talk to you,
But your abuse is in my brain.
If you be nice to me,
We'll never be apart.
Then there is no possible way,
I'll need to fix my broken heart.
What do you think of it?
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I like it, it has almost a childlike rhythm to it, but the rhythm is not even, that's just my opinion, though, perhaps you like it like that. It's hard to do.
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a beautiful write nothing more needs to be said
alyssa
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awwww nice piece of poetry love it
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nice it could idk use more detail maybe but otherwise very nice
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Good poem about the broken heart.
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