He's cold
his toes dusted black with frost bite
If I had it my way
he'd never be hungry again
A contest entry
- 20 words by Melissa Gayle.
500 points, ended December 19, 2008, 25 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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stunning
I have no other words
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wow
love it
much
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short and sweet,
beautiful and passionate.
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i dont mean to be uncouth, but scarlett from gone with the wind comes to mind, and her quote:'ill never go hungry again'.lol.
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Hello gorgeous!! I love you, and I miss you lots. But it's cool because I'm coming home in like three days and then Im home for like a month. I'm really upset that I'm not going to be getting that much money from work, but at least I still have my job especially since my mom told me that there's been like mad budget cuts and shit. I have to go up to my babas for a weekend on like january 9th or some shit because I was supposed to go up for new years even though I told my dad not to tell her that I was coming up because I hand out with my friends on new years, but he didn't listen to me, lol. But it's cool cause kelcie was like, well I can't go on new years cause I have a band thing, so I'm going up a different weekend, do you wanna go up with me so that you can hang out with your friends on new years, and I was like, yeah sure that's fine. And guess what I'm doing when I go up? I'm seeing an opera and going to church. Oh fucking joy. Doesn't that sound like so much fun? I'm not excited. So, my uncle bob wanted me to tell you and pam that he said hi, and that you're a good kid. He was a little smashed so he was feeling sentimental, lol. Okay, well I have to go meet with my directing group soon, so I love you!
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Ah..the turn you gave in the third line is wonderful..well done...
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