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Abusive Love

You can push me in a corner,
Beat me until I'm blue.
Just in case you forgot,
I'm still in love with you.

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  • Hells Shadow
    December 16, 2008

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    Oh wow sweetie so little says so much this is a perfect example of how you dont need to say alot to get your point across a beauitiful write thanks
    Alyssa


  • DancingQueenAngi
    December 16, 2008

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    Sad, but so true. We often forgive those who hurt us the most because we love them and we don't want to believe it happened. Short and to the point. I loved the simplicity of this write.
    Beautiful!
    ~Angi


  • NubianQueen05
    December 15, 2008

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    this is good...i like it...are you getting abused or are you just writing this? well take care...keep up the good work ~Monique~