YOU GAVE ME LIFE
YOU SHOWED ME LOVE
YOU GAVE ME UP
IT HURT ME SO
YOU ARE MY MOM
A contest entry
- 20 words by Melissa Gayle.
500 points, ended December 19, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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...why is everything capitalized? it feels more like you're screaming it. it will have the same emotion without caps..
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Wow very nice, it really shows your pain in twenty words


