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[ I prefer you when i dream ]

I prefer you when i dream
Where we'd talk and talk for hours
And you didn't have to think you were in love with me
Just to talk and listen to the music that filled our very souls
And I, I'm just falling apart
And we, are  we friends anymore?
Cause are so cold, your heart, your hands, your eyes
My hands are shaking from the freeze
The chill blowing through my dreams
And your silence is getting so hard to bare
So just leave me to sleep

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