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Birthday Wishes

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Birthday wishes to you my friend,
happiness and joy to no end!

May your birthday be full of cheer,
that will last until next year!

Birthday wishes to you Ann Dee,
wear a proud smile, for all to see!

On this day, may you laugh out loud,
wear your timeless wisdom proud!

Birthday wishes to you my friend,
happiness and joy to no end!

~Dedicated to Ann Dee on her Birthday~
Raymond

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  • skye01 gold member
    March 26, 2009
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    Reallly nice poem. Good write.

  • kedoconnor
    March 8, 2009

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    well done

    good control of rhyme in a working meter. it smacks of Sues, which is complinent. it is good to acknowledge each and every before, like atlantis, we just disappear from view.

    all the best,
    kevin o'connor/ui'connabhair


  • SilentTearsOnceMore
    December 18, 2008
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    Great poem,
    Great use of rhyme too.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 15, 2008
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    Happy birthday from me too, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • AnnD Moderators member
    December 15, 2008

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    Absolutely beeatuiful. thankyou so very much for such lovely warm thoughts and birthday wishes.
    Today has been a really brilliant day for me on here. Thak you for making it special.

    Good luck in the contest.

    Ann


  • Rejected Easter Egg
    December 15, 2008
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    Thank you for entering, it was a beautiful write. Good Luck

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