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Selfish You

You don't understand
How could you?

Selfish you

I'm alone
I'm me
And there's nothing you can do

So take your silly words
Usless insults
And leave me alone

You may have thought
I was going to wait

You were wrong

Your time is up
So get up
And get gone

And never
          never
              never
Come back

Goodbye

Author notes

This was random and not my usual writing style...but it was fun.

Not about me, so don't get worked up.

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    January 15
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    Good sryle here

    I like to try new things now and then myself

  • Black-Fang
    December 16, 2008

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    i really like the style, and the title is good draws attention well
    sometimes i find its nice for a change too


  • StarIlluminated
    December 15, 2008

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    Haha I have to say it was the title that drew me in Sorry, just something about the title was cool . The poem is amazing as well, I enjoyed reading it. Keep writing!!!! I love your poetry!!


  • checkmate-
    December 15, 2008

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    Nice

    Good poem - it's an interesting style. I like the emotion.


    And now for my favorite emoticon, just 'cuz I feel like it...


    hehe

    -Paradox
    (fine, fine, OXY...)


    • liduen silver member
      December 15, 2008
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      YAY! OXY!

      And now for my favorite emoticon

      Thanks for the comment!

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