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Does he want to know the truth?
Does he really want to hear it?
The truth is he's on my mind
Each and every minute.
I tell myself I shouldn't
'Cause love just leads to pain.
But I can't hold back a smile
Every time I hear his name.
Does he feel the same for me?
I highly have my doubts.
But if he's not looking for love,
Why'd he even ask me out?

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  • Mrs.Shadow
    January 17, 2009

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    it flows amazing except for that last line.. the even throws it off.. better then mine..as usual i like it