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Little Joys of Christmas


Evergreen boughs that fill our homes
With fragrant Christmas scents,
Hearts filled with the loving glow
That Christmas represents;


Christmas cookies, turkeys stuffed,
Festive holly berry,
Little faces bright with joy,
Loved ones being merry;


Parties, songs, beribboned gifts,
Silver bells that tinkle,
Christmas trees and ornaments,
Colorful lights that twinkle;


Relatives waiting with open arms
To smile and hug and kiss us;
These are some of the special joys
That come along with Christmas.

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  • fluffyvampire
    January 20
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    i liked it your a great poet and the way you put image in your poetry is fantastic


  • daviscth silver member
    December 23, 2008

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    You did a beautiful job describing the feelings of Christmas. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest.

  • panic-tiger-is-here
    December 22, 2008

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    I like it. Its flows so well and you dont have to stop and re-read the lines it just fits. Nice work


  • XxApatheticAngelxX
    December 16, 2008
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    I had fun writing this...

  • harriet567
    December 16, 2008

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    Lovely poem with effective rhyming in the 2nd and 4th lines. I love your choice of words and the title - it has a feel good factor in every line. Well written!


  • moderndayvampire
    December 16, 2008
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    great

    this is very sweet and paints a lovely picture,
    good luck in my contest.

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