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Deadly

This glass is a tool
This pain is nothing more
These screams are silent
Im bleeding but it feels so good.
I watch the crimson pour onto the floor.
In no time at all I'll be dead.

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  • serenity silvermoon
    December 18, 2008

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    this is a very simple poem but it is a very good one as well keep up the good work thanks for sharing and god bless

    serenity


  • hks
    December 15, 2008
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    bahh :[