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Empty

Empty because you're gone
You left me again
Once again broken-hearted
Left to pick up the pieces
Alone
No one to talk to
So much pain
Unbearable
How much more can I take?
Is it really over?
Will I ever love again?

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  • Bob Fox
    December 15, 2008

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    My

    Pain and love. they seem to go hand in hand. But true love comes but a few times in life . No pain until the loss.


  • Ademon
    December 15, 2008

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    To answer your questions, a lot because you're strong, yes sadly but you will become strong because of it, yes love is eternal and will come once again...patience! :-) beautiful write.

    • embertathiana
      January 11
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      How many more have you commented on ? Than you again You're wonderful !!!