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The blood drips red
as it soaks the band-aid
That hunger is fed
the pain I paid

I hate what I do
but I can't stop it
It's all because of you
and the nerves you hit

I bleed for it all
the words and the lies
Can't stand to watch me fall
I can see it in your eyes

So pack up and go
take your lies with you
That end goes to show
that you loved me too

In everything I gave you
you threw it back at me
My pain only knew
what in your actions is does see

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