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Life

When you are born things seem to change,
The world might become a little more strange.
People gather together to see you enter this creation of God,
Just to find out that you are more than a little odd.
In this life you will make mistakes,
But don't worry, time heals all aches.
People will judge you for who you are,
Don't let that bother you, just be bizarre.
Once you realize that time stops for no one,
Then you realize that life's one big rerun.

One minute your happy,
The next you are sad.
One minute your sappy,
The next you are glad.
Sometimes life throws you emotions,
We're all blessed to have.
Some are made into potions,
That are up for the grab.
Life leads you in all kinds of directions,
Some are good and some are bad.
But when you are loved for your imperfections,
Some are exciting and some are mad.
Life ends at death,
But love last forever.
When you take that last breath,
Life's over but however.........


You've watched the rerun,
And seen time stop for no one.
You didn't let it bother you, you became bizarre,
As people often do they judged you for who you are.
You didn't worry and time healed your aches,
And yes in this life you did make mistakes.
Those people found out that you were more than a little odd,
They also gathered together to see you enter and leave this creation of God.
The world did become a little more strange,
When you were born all things seem to change.

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  • MJ Forgives
    September 5
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    Wow when I was reading this my heart was taken by this. Then I saw that you entered in my last contest and I am like what?! How come did I not give this an award? Well I am going to put you on the finalist. I hope you do well in my contest and thanks for entering.
    -Jess


  • Little Lesley
    August 16
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    I loved your rhyme! Great job! Wow. I'm speechless!
    Wish you the best of luck!
    ♥~Little Lesley~♥

  • poets whisper silver member
    August 4

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    some might say that the rhyme feels forced. I thought that at first, but I've read it over a few times and now it seems familiar. Nice job. thank you for entering. I look forward to reading your 2nd entry.

  • MJ Forgives
    August 1

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    Interesting piece of writing. It is so true what your poem say. I hope you do wonderful in my poem and thanks for entering!

  • saz 09
    July 31
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    well written thanks for entering good luck!


  • larkbird
    May 2

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    This is a great poem! Funny, thoughtful, creative, the whole nine yards. I liked how you more or less looped it at the beginning and end, and it definately was a poem with lots of personality. A really great write.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    February 7

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    I love the contents and flow in this.
    Very creative work here and I enjoyed
    reading it. Take care and keep it up!




    Jeremy0826


  • Cant force beloved
    January 6
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    This is cute reading. Enjoyed it.


  • januaryrain gold member
    January 3

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    I like the way you come full circle with this wonderful write on life. Yes the world did need one more poem on life.
    Well done.
    Thank you for the entry. I like it.


  • Latet Artifex
    January 2

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    This was a nice poem, however it was not written in the form I am looking for. Please feel welcome to submit again with a poem that meets my contest's requirements.


  • starving4perfection
    December 29, 2008

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    LOVE IT!

    wow i really like this =] i love the structure of it and it flows great! its brilliant! ur a great writer keep up the good work! x


    • Beautiful Liar
      January 1
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      Thanks Im really glad you liked it. I just felt like the world needed just one more poem about life.


  • xxvampyregirlxx
    December 15, 2008
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    Hmm. Amazing. I like it

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