My precious angel
All that is right in me
Perhaps your mother was right for me
As I watch you sleep
I cherish the moment
Praying I live to see your graduation
Your first step,your first word
Lord give me the strength to go out and get all she deserve
My baby girl, my world
Facial feature heavily favors me
With her tiny hand fixated in my palm
I wonder will my financial status be a set back
No matter because if my little girl need it Imma get that
A contest entry
- My Baby by celadia.
700 points, ended December 25, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This would have been alright without all the grammatical mistakes, which, to be honest, made it hard for me to take the poem seriously.
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This is nice from a father's perspective, I like the lean on money, of course that's what every man thinks of, it's sweet and shows how much love can come about because of small bundles.
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this was beautiful
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awwwwwwwww....am i really reading a sweet poem from YOU?!?....this is cute i hope you do well in the contest
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thanks for the comment
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Thsi was how I felt when my little girl was first born, living with me. Before my baby mother got her taken away by child services
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