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Short Poems #4

~Can you help me~

Can you help me see whats going on
I rather talk in person then on the phone
look at me and tell me the truth
let me know is this what you want to do
I wanna make this last
I'm trying to work on the future and forget the past
I dont want anyone getting hurt
So can we make this work?


~Life Is Like A Rose~

To me life is like a rose
Every petal repersents someone or something in your life

When one falls you just let someone or something go

So what happens when theres none left

Do you get another one?

How do you keep it alive...put it in water *No*

Do you put in the fridge? *Maybe*

So when will my sun come and shine and make me right again?

Whose going to water me....How many more of mine will fall off?

Until I realize fake people and bad habits in mi life.....

 

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  • geminiblacc silver member
    September 12
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    Sorry I forgot to applaud.

  • geminiblacc silver member
    September 12

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    I like 'can you help me' it reminds me of a awquard conversation that you have to have when youve broken up with your sig other and it's the first time that you have to talk. You want to tell him to come to me so we can talk face to face but it's hard sometimes depending on how bad the break up was.

    And I also I like Life is like a rose. I believe that concept and I loved how you questioned it. What happens when all the petals are gone? Whose going to water me. I love that. That poem inspired me to write one. I'll post it once it's finished. You are very talented I hope you add more.