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Come running.

Even when darkness comes and grabs your hand, I will not let it and I will shun it from our very presence. For those who feel like all is lost and being found is of no value, have no fear. For in you is more than a conqueror and I am next to you, fighting your battles too. In the very presence of thine enemies, I am amongst you, telling them to flee.

For all of you may have great burdens and abound in fear, but there is no need. For those who seek in my triumph have found victory. Yes indeed, I know, you want something more plausible, more permanent, something that you can touch or see. But is love itself, the feeling, touchable or viewable? No. Yet how many cherish it so? I see your tears and feel your pains and it burdens me so. I only desire for you to seek and find me, to know that it isn't over with. That even in the darkest nights when the only words you can muster is when you ask the question, "Why?" Don't refute all that there is left. You may be strong or you may be weak. You may be filled with joy or your life maybe filled with sorrow. Either way...

come running.


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  • celadia
    December 20, 2008
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    this is about the emotion love , maybe.


  • pumpykin
    December 19, 2008

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    WOW. That's really all I can manage to say lol....this is amazing, and very uplifting Good luck in the contest ^^


  • Zenda-Lokki gold member
    December 18, 2008

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    I agree with the other comments, this poem feels very spiritual indeed and sends me into myself. Very thought provoking piece. Great job, good luck in both contests.


  • Uniquely-Scarred
    December 17, 2008
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    mmm intresting, i got the message take care


  • blueyez
    December 16, 2008

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    This actually sounds very spiritual! I enjoyed it. If ever I were depressed this would be a lovely read to partake of!
    Peace and love


  • Silent Words
    December 16, 2008

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    I feel like this has a very spiritual quality to it. I get a lot of companionship and relational value from this too. You've done a great job of intertwining old language with new and placing questions in as well. A pretty interesting piece.


  • movedon
    December 15, 2008
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    So beautiful my brother. Your true talent is shining through in this.

    xxoo
    gypsy


  • jul
    December 15, 2008

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    how sweet, very heartfelt, comforting and sincere.
    You may be strong or you may be weak. You may be filled with joy or your life maybe filled with sorrow. Either way...
    come running.
    Thanks for sharing.


  • xxvampyregirlxx
    December 15, 2008
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    Hmm. Nice

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