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Hmm I don't feel I fit in.

Hmm I don’t feel I fit in

Hmm I don’t feel I fit in somehow,
Not sure exactly what way my feelings are,

Just the fact of knowing; not fitting in,
Is one thing in life that is hard to except,

Yes; you can try very hard though maybe…
It’s best to forget, the past wee while I have found,

Things getting extremely hard; what happens now?
This I’m unsure off yet I pray I’m guided home.

Namaste Selfexpressive.

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  • Bob Fox
    December 15, 2008

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    Karen

    strange , but as a kid I always felt that way. I wonder if we carry it on thru life. But as a poet you fit very well my friend.


    • Selfexpressive
      December 16, 2008

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      Thank you Bob my friend... I always felt as a kid I didn't quite fit in either (though I was always popular with my friends) but in myself knew I was different... most likely to do with my re spirituality... thank you also for your kind comments... maybe we do carry it through life... hmm, x


  • kareneisenlord gold member
    December 15, 2008
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    I am sorry that you feel this way hon!

    Do you want to know a secret? I feel this way almost all of the time too! Love, Karen

    • Selfexpressive
      December 16, 2008
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      Karen... I'm really unsure of my feelings right now and thats being honest, I guess right now, I have hit a low in myself and can feel the darkness coming in and coldness... not a nice feeling at all and sad too... thanks for everything, love,

      Selfexpressive aka Karen x