Have you ever loved someone
That didn’t love you back?
They lied and said they did
Just to keep you on their track
You couldn’t see the real person
Behind those deceiving eyes
They were a stranger you never knew
Playing with your mind
When you finally found the truth
You were very heartbroken
‘Cause you were 100% sure
That you had found that golden token
But you still love them
No matter what they do
Still wondering
Will they ever be in love with you?
A contest entry
- Wasted time? by Talitha777.
1000 points, ended December 21, 2008, 26 entries
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You asked me a question, remember that question...
this poem, reminds me of that question...
*deep sigh*
I wish I could erase that pain from you...
Its a great poem....
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i have been there, i am there.
if you don't want to see the truth you wont.
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This is really good! Very well written for sure. This is so sad...so true though. It happens more then one would want it to. Keep writing.
~*Lady
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i love this
and ive experienced this
it hurts
and your poem
says that -
I have he was my best friend for several years and I loved him with everything I could and he always looked right through me..
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Wow, "But you still love them
No matter what they do
Still wondering
Will they ever be in love with you?" This part really stuck on to me. I really like it. -
exceptional poem i heard
this poem is like a relate to everyone,
i like that one part when u said
-No matter what they do
Still wondering
Will they ever be in love with you? - -
I enjoy this one, I can definitely relate to it.
Bravo -
amzing sweety! i love this! it sucks really bad to feel like this... i would know its been done to me more than a few times... your a great writter babe
~*Princess Cuddle Bug*~
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LOVE IT!!!! IT DESCRIBES ANYBODY WHO'S BEEN THREW THIS COMPLETELY, and i know exactly how you feel....ur not alone either, sweetheart.
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WOW!!!!
i absolutely love it!!!
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i love this poem..and i know exactly how it feels to be in love with somebody who isn't in love with me...sometimes i cant stand that he doesn't feel the same way but i have gotten used to it... other wise its a great poem...
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my god, i love this poem, i know exactly how it feels to love some one who just uses u and even if u no the truth u still cant help but love them, its an amazing poem keep up the good work oh and um thanks for the comment on my poem sorry, if u like the emotion in that one u should read 'did not die' its again very emotional lol x
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Wow... my very good friend can relate to this.. how devestating... well portrayed emotions here, youngun...
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amazing
you are AMAZING at writing poems
i swear, you're writing what i'm feeling
this was incredible
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