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Jubilee of Renunciation

Play the tape backwards. Up ahead
on the reversed Quantum timeline
a second childhood looms; menopause
is puberty, and gifts of Eros, illo tempore
wrangled like winds into an Aeolian bag
or elder gods with Titanic struggle
shut up in cavernous salt domes
guarded by hundred-handed trusties,
now erupt into the synaptic ocean.
For here too the inmost becomes outmost
and our first masturbation-fantasies
are mirrored back in moving images
that rise like fish to the surface
of the flood tide of pornography.

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  • Heroesrox
    March 23

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    This was a very good piece. I think it was very creative. I loved the title as I am impartial to the word Jubilee. Great word. Keep up the great work!!!


  • Joseph Hollis
    December 15, 2008

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    Very offbeat and creative. This one is heavily laden with metaphor and abstractions. I think I was able to get the gist of it and form my own interpretations. Very thought-provoking. Thanks for sharing.