So here is it
We're coming up on the last days
Got a few things to quote
Before we part ways
Sorry for all the times
That I gave you shit
You gave me memories
That I'll never forget
Remember day one?
Chat, dance and games
Found myself lucky
Just to get your name
All the times that
You were by my side
Whispering comforts
When I wanted to cry
So I guess you caught me
You know I still care
Still think you're beautiful
Paint stains or short hair
We had our ups and downs
But remember this
Once I'm out of town
You're gonna be missed
Author notes
My parting words to a friend/flame from college that I may never see again..God I'm gonna miss her.
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Very Sweet
The imagery here is great! The rhyme and the flow are really awesome. The sentiment is what really counts with this piece though. It is sad when we have to say goodbye to someone and never know when or if we will ever see them again. I have had a few times like that in my life and I can relate to this piece, even empathize. Very hearfelt and sweet. Much luck to you in life, love, and everything else. Great write!
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This is really good..sad but good.
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Aww this is sooo sweet!
good words!
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Heh, this made me tear up.. I know I'd miss you, especially if I were this girl and knew you cared so much for me. Parting ways is always difficult, but remember, only diamonds are forever.
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awww this is incredibly sweet.. nostalgic, makes me think of my past.
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