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A Drain -HM

Missing image

I love you,
but I am not in-love
with you


so drips venom
from cut-tongued tragedy

I do not
kiss
and make up

that would be like
drinking Draino





Author notes

prompt - 3.) Your promises are venom, your kisses acid

jpg = Face Melt by ~Ryvius http://ryvius.deviantart.com/art/Face-Melt-103062915

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  • penman gold member
    December 20, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


    • CarolDesjarlais silver member
      December 21, 2008
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      ty, pen friend.... happens, this happened to someone close to me. This was a way to relieve msyelf of some of the angst I was feeling for her.


  • motel silver member
    December 15, 2008

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    to be able to truly let go of a bad relationship without that emotional charge of anger ... having no animosity but also no illusion of resurrecting something that did not work.
    great images and the picture ties in well.
    thanks and good luck in the contest.


    • CarolDesjarlais silver member
      December 21, 2008
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      I read it over again and see that there are ranges of emotions, indeed, as real life experiences offer. I just simply do not understand such as this happening, and yet, it is understandable at professional and more complex levels. I took this one personally! Ty for the comment.