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For a special friend

You are a special, true friend
I hope your happiness never ends.
You are honest and loyal;
you always look grand and royal.
You’ve been very kind
you have a great mind!
I just wanted to say,
I hope you have a nice day!!

xxx

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  • Slick99
    December 29, 2008
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    for a special friend

    this is very nice!!! the rhyme is good. thanks for sharing!!! -Slick

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    December 15, 2008

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    Very nice. So warm and generous.
    Whoever you dedicate this to is very lucky.
    Thanks for sharing.
    Brian


    • horsey4eva
      December 22, 2008
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      Tarr xx

      yess i made it up for a friend.. xx (: i will read one of ur poems and send a comment x


  • Cant force beloved
    December 15, 2008

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    This so cute, I think it would be great on a greeting card. You should try that out.

    Loved this.