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yeah yeah yeah

yeah you know me,
yeah you see me,
yeah you talk to me,
and yeah i ignore you.

I never noticed you before,
at least until i saw your beautiful eyes,
as blue as the sky on a warm summers day,
they make me forget all of my troubles.

I never noticed before,
i see the way you look at me,
with so much passion in your eyes,
a smile spreads across my face.

I never notice it before,
the way you wear your hair,
sticking up in every direction,
it reminds me of a day at the beach.

Now that i've begun to notice you,
i begin to see the things i've never seen before,
like the way i am irrevocably in love with you,
the things that you make me do.

yeah you know me,
yeah i know you,
yeah you see me,
yeah i see you,
yeah you talk to me,
yeah i talk to you,
yeah you love me,
and now i love you.

Author notes

This is about how i ignored this one kid and now i am irrevocably in love with him and we have been dating for about 8 months now and i am loving it.

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