Knuckles clenched around fear
and uncertainty
what will happen if you just let go?
nothing probably,
but you never know
so just keep hanging in there
you will either fall or fly.
A contest entry
- Keep holding on by Beauty Of Silence.
800 points, ended December 18, 2008, 16 entries
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Comments
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ooooh i like the ending. you will either fly or fly. awww, great ending i tell ya
i just looove it. well, i enjoyed reading this. it was thought-provoking. keep penning, and thanks for the entry
All the best
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yep, you captured it with perfection and brevity
sometimes we need to get a grip, and at other times we simply need to grasp the letting go...excellent write.~Artis
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