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The Message of Christmas

It's Christmas time again!
The turkey's roasting in the oven,
Mince pies are ready in the tin,
The shopping's nearly complete,
Cards are arriving from friends far and near.


But what's that to do with the baby

Born 2000 years ago in Bethlehem?
We look with delight at the nativity scene,

Mary and Joseph watching over the child

Lying in the hay,

Stars shining brightly in the sky above.

How can it be that God who made the stars
Came to be born like one of us?
He must love us more than we can know
To confine himself to human form,
Then to die a criminal's death
When he had committed no crime.

Yes, Lord, I'm beginning to understand,
But what will it mean in terms of cost?
Surely I'll have to pay something,
For I don't deserve your love!

"No, my child, I have paid it all... that baby,

My Son, who was born in a manger,
Has given his life for your salvation,
He has paid the price in full

To win back a fallen creation.

 

All you have to do is believe

And trust my promises,
Confess your sin and commit

Your life to following me.

 

But don't keep the message to yourself -
Go and share the Good News ...
The message is for everyone to come
And receive the greatest gift - my Son!"

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  • daviscth silver member
    December 29, 2008
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    This is a beautiful poem and tells the true meaning of our holiday season.

    • harriet567
      January 3
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      Thank you SO MUCH for your comment - I hope you had a wonderful Christmas and a good start to 2009. God bless, Harriet


  • Violinstrings silver member
    December 25, 2008

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    very well done

    your words are full of emotion
    just your style fills me with emotion
    not to forget this day was made by God
    it is joyful

    • harriet567
      January 3
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      Thank you for your comment - so pleased you appreciated my poem, Harriet


  • morgana raven Greeters member
    December 24, 2008

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    I think this is a nice poem, to be honest it reminds me of when i was in primary school, not the writing, but the images, the amount of times i was in navitity plays when i was a kid...

    Has given his life for your salvation,
    He has paid the price in full

    To win back a fallen creation.


    i think this was a really ice rhyme here.
    great work.
    Laura.


  • moderndayvampire
    December 16, 2008

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    good work

    this is a great piece,it does not tell me much about your feelings,however it is something we lose sight of all too often,thankyou for entering and good luck!

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