So many questions
So little time
Sometimes I ask
Am I loosing my mind?
So many decisions
I know I can't make
So much criticism
I simply just can't take.
I can't please everyone
Though I always will try.
Sometimes I get discouraged
But I don't know why!
I hate all the pressures
That are brought upon me.
Too many decisions
That I'd rather there be
I just can't stand it
Don't know what to do
To feel what I feel...
...if only you knew
I'm not looking for sympathy
I just wish it would end.
But I feel it's a battle
That I'll never win.
Author notes
thought it cudnt hurt anyone to enter a contest, btw its about cutting
A contest entry
- Why by charmander13.
700 points, ended December 24, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you think???
Comments
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wow this was very emotional!, is this from personl experience?
"But I feel it's a battle
That I'll never win."
dude its okay to lose a battle, as long as you fight on to win the war. we're not gonna win every battle life throws at us, and on some cases you have to raise your hands and reluctantly accept defeat, but its how you pick yourself that makes you who you are.
but back to the point this was an awesome write dude (as usual from you)
Take Care XXX
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Yes, I can understand why you'd feel that it's "a battle/That I'll never win", and... that's why I'd love for you to read a poem of mine-
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4705621
Yes, it's about cutting too .
Nice, honest write.
Thanks for your entry and all the best to you! -
Great write, i enjoyed reading it
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