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2/17/07

so rare
how that smiles gathered together
so cool,
how we all become and stay together.

Together
With these different ours and yours
Becomes one
Together, we gathered
We have never been the same but
Together
Can we stay forever?

- inspired by a picture with my bestfriends..

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 15, 2008

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    i know what you mean in this one, i have seen pics of my friend, the sad part is that i am not in most of them, i think for some i should have taken that chance, keep it flowing