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You at Two

Your sweet head
still rests roundly
in my palms.
Your feet nestle against my belly.
My lips feel your warmth
and all is well in the world.
You, at two
are beautiful
as you'll ever be,
to me.

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  • Mistressofthedark
    December 16, 2008

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    Aw! So sweet! I love this! This is exactly how I feel about my 18 month old niece...she's amazingly beautiful and perfect. Thanks for sharing!


  • RareFlower
    December 15, 2008

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    simply beautiful

    captivating and moving, such beautiful emotions run through this that it left me moved.. You have set the standard.. Thankyou so much and goodluck in the competition.
    Have a magical christmas!
    RareFlower