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Unheard..

04/02/06 lab..

Some reasons can possibly unheard
Things that can’t undo
Finally done and swing-off
But still,
Something wanna sway, inside.

To feel the pain.

You are alone
You are scared
Coz’ sometimes we have to
You asked why
Why is that you’re the one who’s feeling this?

Is this forever
Or it never ends?

You watched your world spinning
As your eyes are burning and yearning

Pain to yourself.

Who’s with you?
My dear friend, befriend to yourself
You world is yours..

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 15, 2008

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    i know this wasn't directed at me, but you can't help but feel like man, keep it flowing. strong words.