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why

why are we still in bed
am i in your head
why do we drink every night
can i stay in your life
why don't you hold my hand
are we damned
why are you going
can you see what i'm showing
why don't i use my eyes
is this a love that dies
why are you going to sleep
should i go and leap

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i am just having some things to work out.

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  • The Cube
    December 15, 2008
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    You ask to many questions. Soimetimes it's better to let them slide by and just let it all go.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 15, 2008

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    i can only say that question, question, just keep coming and everyone has a right to know the answers but sometimes no matter how simple and straightforward the question they are still hard to answer, ain't that funny, keep it flowing