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The Pain Of Loss

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The journey through the darkness
was fraught with distant memories
of bitter loneliness.
For the loss of a child
tears the heart apart,
as the connection to life is lost.

Death comes swiftly, silently
and the world is empty.

Each new sunrise
becomes desolation's cloak,
as the light becomes life's label
of a beacon that no longer
lingers in this time or space.

There is an urge
that can't be denied,
as the pull of a yearning spirit
calls
and is answered.

Then indescribable joy
that descends
when two souls meet,
fills a void,
never to be severed.

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  • penman gold member
    December 22, 2008
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    Excellent

    Such a gifted write. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Ken-Maverick
    December 15, 2008

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    "Each new sunrise
    becomes desolation's cloak,
    as the light becomes life's label
    of a beacon that no longer
    lingers in this time or space."
    This is one deep verse my friend.
    So well said,
    You pen brilliance once again

    All the best to you in the contest

    Ken