I lie awake, another sleepless night,
Hearing only faint sounds within the city,
A dark hotel room, cast in twilight,
My thoughts drift to her, a smile ever so pretty,
The best part of my life, always there to set me right,
My heart aches, body trembles, someone please take pity!
Harsh words, they hurt and sting, such a disgrace,
Wishing I could hold her in my arms and feel her sweet embrace.
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I was a little confused with the ending of the poem. I was thinking that it was going to be a nostalgic happy ending but then I realized that it wasn't. Very creative write. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Sarah
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