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The Call

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I sit and wait for our special time
To call you on your telephone line
Picking up the phone I dial your digits
Lay on the bed and pull down the blankets

You talk to me nasty and get my blood boiling
Telling me how you want to fuck me and get my juices flowing
I grab for the vibrator on the side of the bed
Turned it on, my legs and pussy I spread

Rubbing it on my clit then pushing it inside
"Oh God!" I'm so wet it easily slides
I tell you how I'm going to suck your dick
Suck so hard then your balls I'll lick

You moan in my ear while I'm working one out
getting my freak on and turning myself out
I squeeze my titts while pinching my nipple
Telling you how they feel and jiggle

"Damn I'm such a phone sex junkie!"
As we get down and dirty
I start to get hot and feeling flush
"Oh shit I'm about to cum!"

Moaning loader you're stroking your cock
Your dick is so hard your about to pop
I'm going to cum we both cry out
Exploding so hard we can't do without

This was our pleasure and how it went
Glad that our phone night was very well spent

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes


The pictures with this write I do not claim as my own. Pictures found on yahoo images and D.Brown Photography

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  • Powerful erotic piece with superb imagery here too. Sexuality, sensuality and flow was all here in this great piece of writing. Keep it up. You are talented.

    Dark Wishes
    Wayne Leon

  • Hot as hell... though hell is very hot. I think that your story is just plain amazing in this one... the rhythm and the flow is just plain very well done. I loved it and I loved the imagery, too. Who doesn't like a good erotic poem? Not me. I love poetry, no matter what the genre... as long as it's good. And with you, Choco, it's always good.

    Keep up the good work. You should be published by now. hehe


  • love-SEX-magic
    December 17, 2008
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    wow i like mommy...its really um loud..


  • D Saul So Sexy
    December 17, 2008

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    ya boi hit this righ ca ca lol this was on point though i need to knock some boots around this here joint good luck in the contest 8ROSE8

  • mcfreeman
    December 17, 2008
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    Images...images...images


  • Galaxy2
    December 16, 2008

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    Wow...
    so inviting...
    so lustful...
    so hot...
    I'm all wet...
    your every move makes me horny, honey!
    Kisses on your sweet pussy, my love!
    Gal


  • Lexie -
    December 16, 2008
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    this is very hot and tempting!!
    got a number? LOL


  • Swangrnv gold member
    December 16, 2008

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    HOOOOLLLLEEEE...

    GAWD! DAMNB..l.o.l. yeah, uhmm where duid i put that damn phone at!!!?? l.o.l. wow, some serious heat lady, but then again you always do bring..SERIOUS HEAT!!


  • Joseph Hollis
    December 15, 2008

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    Now, that's what I can a dedication! This one was raw and filled with sexuality. I like your style. A hot and passionate write to compliment a sexy photo. Well done and best of luck in the contest.


  • darell
    December 15, 2008

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    Oh yeah darlin

    Give it to me luscious moma!
    This was a thrilling experience.
    Your words captivated my interest
    from start to finish.
    I love your photo selection as
    it adds dimension.
    This was mmm mmm good girlfriend.
    btw I'm pretty awesome at phonesex.


  • the ripple
    December 15, 2008
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    this proves your poetry defines real hard core and is fill with erotica. good write

  • New-n-Improved
    December 15, 2008

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    I Feel So Intoxicated

    I'm cleaning the sweat off my forehead. You are so nasty but so sexy that it's clean. You got a way with words and I love that about a real poet. I like to give people nicknames that I feel suits them. So I'm going to dub you "Tha Choklat Wonda"! Anyway this poem is very erotic and needs to be put into play with a visual aid. I almost came on myself just reading it.
    Keep writing and I'll keep reading.


  • onesugar gold member
    December 15, 2008

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    Wicked write saying no more LOL!! Damn hon, this is gold. A little phone sex can be soooo, i'll leave it there.
    Good luck with this, though not needed.
    ~sugar~


  • Maxboy gold member
    December 15, 2008

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    !!! Hot~Hot~Hot !!!

    Holy Shit!!! Crap Girl!!! Damn That Was Good!!!
    "Everything Desire said, Ditto, Dildo, Ditto, Dildo"

    Slam Dunk That Contest!!!


  • Desire gold member
    December 15, 2008

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    Ooooooooooooooh~

    and forgot to add- Love the picture too

  • Desire gold member
    December 15, 2008
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    Oh My Word~~~~


    -drops chico stick-
    Holy Mother of Pearl Jam~
    -takes out squeegee-

    My Monitor lit up like a Christmas tree
    This is HOT~ dayummmmmmmmmmmm
    -trips over cord- (ooops )
    See can't even walk to go get a diet coke
    You go Girl~ Woot!
    (does the Arsenio hand gesture)
    I wonder what You would do with a cell phone
    j/k
    Love this!!
    You Good


    (I would quote but I don't know where to start)
    Thank You for sharing Your Heat and Voice~
    Many blessings to You in the contest- like You need it Sweet One
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • KayJay
    December 15, 2008

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    What's your number? A truly inspirational poem... you have a talent for raw, powerfully erotic writes... Hell, never mind, I'm calling myself
    Ken


  • Beret55 silver member
    December 15, 2008
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    mmmmmmmmmmmmm girl i love your mind.. You do know haw to write steamy stories.. I love it.


  • Dark Otter
    December 15, 2008

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    Once again,

    Your erotica shows what turns us on. A nice little fantasy to play out or to remember. I know the potential of phone sex and dare say it can be stress relief.


  • Glasyalabolas
    December 15, 2008
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    Hot and steamy, leaves the reader wanting more.

    Good write.


  • moluv10
    December 15, 2008
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    HOTT!! Makes me want to make a phone call! Great job! Best of luck in the contest.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    December 15, 2008

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    This is so HOT and KINKY girl! lmao
    It's amazing what a little device like a
    telephone can do for you huh? lol
    Lovely work here and good luck to you
    with this one. Thanks for sending it
    my way and take care!




    Jeremy0826


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    December 15, 2008

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    Mrs. Roy ! you are devilish you did this for real to i know it and i thought my Baby Sam turns me out honey and give me that slam dunk sex you so bad honey Mr. Howard is going to print this and fuck him self real good you go gal nice job goodness


  • Levesta
    December 15, 2008
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    HOT SIS WHAT MORE CAN I SAY


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 15, 2008

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    i can never look at the phone the same way , but then again i never could, lol, this is not just a taste of honey, this is more, but at this moment i can't think right, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • penman gold member
    December 15, 2008
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    Whew!

    Oh my sounds like you are an expert at this. so very intense. Best of luck in the contest.

  • summore
    December 15, 2008
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    WOW. You really made it sizzle. Spoken like a true believer. Very well done.

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