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Is it worth it?

Like the falling of the rain
Comes the falling of the seasons
It’s an undescribable joy
It’s the essence of the reasons

With a hand placed ever tightly
On the flower of which might be
A declaration of love
But is it what you think of?

Because the radiance of our innocence
Is the proof that brings the reverence
Of the things that we hold dearly
But is not yet seen too clearly.

But if I would take the first leap
And entrust us to go deep
Would my courage be the anchor
That would finally bring me down?

Or would the courage that He gave me
Be that very thing that made me
Be the person that you needed
The one who could bear your crown?

So when I question what our worth is
And I know that Yes I’ve heard this
Would you take my hand and tell me
That you want to take the leap?

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  • badnovocaine
    December 15, 2008
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    This is a new style of writing??? I would have never guessed! And thats good. I liked in the end that it was a question and it was indeed a powerful question, one that would have needed to be answered or that one that should always be answered.

    Would my courage be the anchor
    That would finally bring me down?
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    I liked that line a lot.
    Thank you for entering.